The Power Within For this project we wrote a personal narrative it was a non fiction narrative that talked about the topic of "where your power comes from". We partnered with a organization called "So Say We All" to learn how to produce pand improve our writing, then we read our narratives at Project Reo Collective.
DRAFTING I decided the topic of my personal narrative would be my dad. I wrote about how I felt knowing that he is a smoker, and applying the knowledge I have gained through biology to understand how smoking affects your lungs.
I didnt really want to change my first thinking that it was the best work I can make. When revising my first draft I decided to talk about all my dads and my feelings on how I felt of each one of them. then when I revised my second draft I decided to change it to talk about my mom and how she has been able to keep more of a father roll. Then my final draft I added more detail and I was descriptive on the support I get fro my mm and I dont show mty appreciation twords her.
This proces was kind of difficult to do because all of the narratives were very personal and it was hard to open up. At first I didnt want mine createaked but then I wanted my story to be as good as possible. Ifeel like I was able to end with a great nsarrative after all the creatique I got.
Scripting
For thiis section I didnt really aply it to my story I just thought it would come out more naturally as I read through my story. I feel like I could of had a little more scripting but I